I Saw Your Beauty
Flame before my eyesthe wink was unintentionalthe remorsethat's only natural Do you see the destructionin your wakedo you realize you have one"Au contraire"you would say pulling the word from a...
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There's a lot going on in this piece, Doug, but I love it!Quote:we flutter in it's fakewe know betterbut oh my, such grandeurcan I justtouch the laceyou have no ideaof your horrendous forceI hope I...
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Raven you have the essence of it. I like how you said, "flaunts their beauty in the name of truth, but in reality, they have never walked their talk." Yes beauty for beauty's sake, with no reference...
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Wow - this one has teeth!It seems a very cold, and calculating beauty - but spell binding, like an ice queen. Very nicely done"A poem...begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a...
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Beauty from a very different angle - cold, and maybe vulnerable too. I like it very much, it will repay several more readings!
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there are many kinds of beauty in this world, doug ... society not only rewards, but demands, the outward appearance of beauty ... and holds little regard for what lies beneath (where all the...
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Valoe "cold, and calculating beauty" you couldn't be more right. It is that beauty that is "spell binding" but it is like cotton candy, you know what happens if you eat too much...Thanks so much for...
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davicletay definitely a "cold" beauty here and I guess with a bit, a wee bit of "vulnerability."Thanks so much for your perceptive reply.
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Beth you've discovered the "heart" of this poem the repudiation of the silly notion of "beauty" that our society constantly thrusts upon us. It is the heart that must and does matter. I absolutely...
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Listening to Marley will do that.. felt like I entered your thoughts in this deeply written poetic letter, Dan
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oh..... and I bet you can bite too, this piece reminds me of a girl I once knew, she was quite a stunner, when I eventually managed to get to know her I didn't want to know her, a super read dear...
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Dan, Marley and chaps like Dylan are what true beauty is all about, I just wish our society could appreciate that. I think we do to a very small degree but your not seeing these two guys on...
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Brendan I like your hobby, quite interesting to say the least,"Tending rescued rodents and writing poetry."Yeah, I can "bite" when I have to hey, I'm Scottish but of the New World variety, lol!I think...
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